OUTLINE
Topic: Masskara Festival: A
Festival of Smiles
Thesis
Statement: The people of Bacolod
should challenge themselves to keep the Masskara Festival even if hardships
come upon their way.
I.
Introduction
A.
Meaning of Masskara Festival
B.
The History of the Masskara Festival
II.
Body
A. Purpose
of the Festival
1.
Tourism
2.
Economy
B. Effects
of Masskara Festival to the People
1.
Physical Aspect
2.
Mental Aspect
3.
Social Aspect
4.
Psychological Aspect
III. Conclusion
A. Prediction
of the Future
B. Challenge
EXTENDED DEFINITION ESSAY
Sigue lang Sige na. This was the song that paved way for the development
of a famous festival in Bacolod
that depicts many people as a very happy person even if hardships come their
way. This event is called Masskara Festival. So, what is Masskara Festival? Masskara
Festival, also known as the Festival of Smiles, is a 20-day celebration that is
defined to attract thousands of people, may it be locally or internationally,
because of its colorful costumes and smiling masks. The festival was created as
a tool for escapism and a way to generate revenues for big business. It is
celebrated yearly between the first and second Sundays of October and it
showcases a variety of merry making, beer drinking, dining and the most
celebrated part: the street dancing (philippinecountry.com).
In the late 1970’s, Negros Occidental, particularly Bacolod, experienced
severe crisis. These include the Navigation’s luxury liner-MS Don Juan accident
that killed at least a hundred Negros citizens
and the periodic downfall of sugar industry---a primary source of their
livelihood. As a result, in the wake of tragedy and economic hardships and the aspiration
to pull the residents from the pervasive gloomy atmosphere, government
personalities, civic figures and artists with full support from the city
government, they decided to create a festival with a primary goal of hiding the
sadness and sufferings of Negrenses (byahilo.com). Hence, Masskara Festival was
created. From then on, it promoted the city as the “City of Smiles” in order to
uplift public spirits and enable them to “keep on smiling” no matter what. Since
then the Masskara Festival, symbolized by smiling masks, has been held every
October. The term Masskara is a portmanteau, coined by the late artis Ely
Santiago from the word “mass” meaning many
or a group of people, and the Spanish word “cara” that means face. A prominent and significant item
of the festival is the mask worn by the participants in the said activity. Therefore
the festival is described to be a multitude of smiling faces making the people
somehow escape from the reality that they are experiencing hardships in their
life. Masskara Festival
was intended as an encouragement to all to fight back and to keep smiling
despite the sugar problems, and highlighted that hope still existed.
The said celebration is composed of many features including
street dances, pageants, food festivals, sport events, and the like. The main
event which is the street dance competition is well-equipped with gyrating participants
performing under the sun showing their dancing talents in front of screaming
fans and supporters that came from different places. This annual festival,
which has become one of Philippines
best known tourist attraction, has been earning raves both from local and
foreign tourists. Masskara Festival has also been judged the most beautiful and
colorful festival among the various contingents from other countries. That is why this celebration is considered to be one of the
factors why Bacolod is one of the prestigious
tourist spots of the Philippines.
One of the main purposes of the festival is to preserve then will and
commitment of the people from Bacolod that even if hardships and struggles come
in their way, they should always try to smile and they can already forget their
problems and do whatever goals they aim and be the person they wan to be. Another
reason for the festival is for economic purposes. During the festival, many
people are accommodated to their hotels and restaurants adding up to the income
of their businesses. The festival also contributes to the tourism of Bacolod. If there is high
tourism, there will be high income; if there is high income, there will be
enough money for people; if there will be enough money for people, and then
there will be no poverty in the Philippines.
The province earns so much with this festival that there could be possibilities
that it can help in the improvement and the development of the place.
So what are the effects of the festival to the people? Actually,
the people are affected physically, mentally, socially and psychologically. The
people that in point of fact participate in the actual street dance competition
are given the chance to have a leaner and fitter kind of body. Just think of
it, many months of practice, hardships and synchronization will not give you
even a pinch of muscle. Seriously? Why would you join here if it will no even
give you a single benefit? There are also times that the stamina of those people
joining here are given much more emphasis in the sense that the dance itself is
already lively meaning it requires a person to have agility and endurance. The
festival can possibly change the attitude of the dancers and also the people
watching how important the dance is. It may instill to their minds how
important the festival is to their life and why the city government of Bacolod is doing their
job only to preserve the festival itself. The people can also be affected socially
and psychologically in the sense that the festival gives them the chance to interact
and mingle to different walks of life. It can give them the chance to know what
is already happening to their environment through which the festival was
created. It can give them the awareness on how people try to change their life
and how they make possibilities to live a WONDERFUL life.
There are possibilities that in the next generations, the Festival of Smiles can turn into the Festival of Melancholy. It is because of the problems happening not only in the world especially in the Philippines including global warming, corruption, and even poverty that may lessen the confidence of the people and it may instill to their minds that they can never escape the fact that they are experiencing problems in their life. It is up to the people of Bacolod, the Negrenses, on how they will be coping with the problems they are encountering. They must challenge themselves to keep the flame of Masskara Festival burning.
Resources
Masskara Festival. Retrieved from http://www.philippinecountry.com/philippine_festivals/masskara_festival.html
Dee, Enrique. (2011, March 3). Masskara Festival Schedule 2011. Retrieved from http://www.byahilo.com/2011/03/03/masskara-festival-2011-schedule/#axzz21LfGE9GO
Let's start with the introduction. You could improve your essay more if you will have a strong attention grabber.
TumugonBurahinYour essay is splendid!! The main ideas are very well supported by supporting details. Also, you have very good word choices! Deep words contribute to a stronger essay! Very good! There are some points I noticed. Be careful in pronoun usage and with your Subject-Verb Agreement. And also, there are some typographical errors in the essay. Just make the necessary changes while revising.
I love it how real life experiences are connected to the essay. The essay is very well made! It inspired me of attending in one of the Masskara festival someday. You also ended your essay very well!
Overall, it is a nice and terrific essay! :)Keep up the good work!
It's a good essay, overall. However, you may want to consider interchanging the paragraphs for the body, though. Recheck and proof read for minor errors within paragraphs. Also, try restating main points in different ways as they seem kinda redundant.
TumugonBurahinI think your essay is well-written. You provided a lot of supporting details and examples about the Festival. You vividly described the Masskara festival that is enough to define that festival. You also provided essential background information of the festival that will help the readers know and visualize the origin of it. Also, you have very good choice of words that made your essay interesting. Although, you just need to edit some minor errors like typographical errors and you just need to provide more details that would support your thesis statement because your thesis statement was not supported that much by details and explanation. But, I think you really did a great job in writing your extended definition essay :)
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